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Cain, Freddie, and Marigold head out for doughnuts the next morning. Freddie’s suspicion that Marigold may be attracted to Whit is confirmed when Marigold insists they call to invite Whit since the doughnut shop in one of his favorites (a detail that becomes important later). When they call him, he is groggy because he is in Massachusetts General Hospital being treated for a stab wound. Apparently, someone came to his parents’ house and stabbed him the night before.
Freddie discovers she has several messages on her phone. These messages include a photo of her front door and a photo of another front door, which Marigold realizes is the front door to Whit’s house (with the implication that she has been to Whit’s house despite just meeting him). When the three get to the hospital, Whit is still groggy and being treated for his wounds. A police detective is there, so Freddie shows the detective the photos of her and Whit’s doors. The detective asks Marigold to explain why she knows Whit’s front door on sight. Marigold is forced to confess that she went to Whit’s house to visit him but lost her nerve at the last minute. The detective takes Marigold’s phone as evidence. Unsure of what else to do, they pick up fancy doughnuts for Whit.
Leo A writes to Hannah that he thinks it is more and more likely that Cain is the killer, although he does make protestations that he doesn’t want to interfere with Hannah‘s plotting of her own novel. He says it is extremely cold in Boston. He also tells her that he might like to have an incident room like the one Cain uses to plot his novels. The agent Leo A hoped would begin to represent him after reading his manuscript has declined to do so. He is disappointed. He blames his failure to get an agent on discrimination against white, male writers in the publishing industry.
The police interview all four of the friends separately, and they keep Cain the longest. Freddie finds her interview to be “emotionless, a simple gathering of facts—dates, times, locations. […] simply punching in information. [She] get[s] the feeling that [she has] become part of a process, absorbed into the machinery of the investigation” (56). The police keep their phones, forcing them to buy new ones and get new numbers.
The three friends return to Freddie’s apartment for dinner and more bonding as they discuss the facts of the case. Marigold speculates on the psychology of the killer, but this conversation upsets Cain, who snaps at her that the three of them working at determining the killer’s identity is something out of the crime/procedural drama Criminal Minds. He comforts her after she gets upset. The three suspect that the person who sent the pictures is either involved in the killing or trying to warn Freddie that she is in danger. Marigold reveals that she went by Whit’s house five times without going in, behavior that is concerning. Cain quips that sending pictures may mean the person who sent the pictures is older and doesn’t know how to text.
Leo A writes to Hannah and chides her for not having gotten back to him. He is worried that the Australian bushfires may have gotten her, a fate he paints in vivid detail. Leo A prods Hannah to say whether Hannah’s publisher has gotten back to her about possibly publishing Leo A’s manuscript.
The three friends buy doughnuts at trendy Around the Hole Doughnuts and go to the hospital to visit Whit. They encounter Whit’s mother, Jean Metter, discussing something to do with the case, and there are two FBI agents in the room when they arrive. Cain splits from the group when he sees the FBI agents but comes around once they leave. Once in the room, Freddie, Marigold, Cain, and Whit discuss what they know so far about the case. They get into a guessing game about each other’s ages. It turns out that Cain is 30 years old, Freddie is 27, and the other two are in their early twenties. The FBI agents were questioning Whit about whether Whit once knew Cain by another name. Cain tells the three friends that “Cain McLeod” is a pen name. His real name is Abel Manners. They laugh at his name. They leave the room when Whit breaks a stitch laughing.
In his email, Leo A gives more advice and notes to Hannah, including some names of possible doughnut shops aside from Dunkin’ Donuts. He advises her that Whit and Marigold are not likely to be pursuing graduate degrees in their very early twenties, especially Whit. Leo A tells Hannah it is not her fault Hannah’s agent won’t accept his novel and represent him.
Whit’s father tells them Jean doesn’t want them visiting Whit anymore. The group departs, and Freddie makes her way back to her apartment to do some writing. On the way there, Leo B runs her down and says he just happened to see her. She is surprised by how agile his running is, especially since she has always thought of him as a little bit older. He arranges for them to eat at his place that night. Freddie gets in a little more writing, and then she goes over to Leo B’s place. They eat pizza and end up discussing writing. Leo B contends that all writing in one form or another is a romance because all writing is about relationships. Freddie reads through his work in progress, and she is impressed by how beautiful the writing is in patches. She leaves, and there is awkwardness as they part. She realizes that Leo B is probably attracted to her.
In an email to Hannah, Leo A writes that he is very appreciative that Freddie has included him as a character, and he hopes that his own writing has inspired the description of Leo B’s writing in the book. He also shares that the agent who rejected his manuscript mysteriously died. He says that it is ironic that “days ago she was vibrant and mighty, she had the power to realize or kill dreams, and today she herself is dead” (78).
Freddie receives a second box of grocery deliveries. Cain and Marigold deny they sent it. She feels spooked, so she asks the doorman to keep an eye out for strangers at her building. She goes out on a date with Cain that night. They go to a movie and dinner. Cain shares more about his difficult childhood. His father died, and his mother remarried when Cain was eight. Cain’s stepfather was unkind to him. When Cain was a teen, he ran away from the family home in Charlotte, North Carolina, and landed in Boston.
Cain and Freddie also discuss whether it is possible to still enjoy a piece of art like The Birds, the Alfred Hitchcock movie starring Tippi Hedren, when Tippi alleged that Hitchcock sexually assaulted her during filming. Cain doesn’t believe the morality of the creator should make any difference in the reception of their creations, but Freddie is less certain. They are out eating after the film when Marigold turns up, claiming the encounter is by chance. Freddie believes Marigold is stalking them.
Leo A writes that he hears Australia has closed its borders due to the COVID pandemic. He suspects the research trip he hoped Hannah would make to the United States is canceled. He gives Hannah more notes on making her characters realistic. Since Cain is from North Carolina, Hannah should be sure to include Southern idioms like “joint” instead of “restaurant” and “yonder” and “y’all” in his speech (85). He writes about American democracy dying and the world turning into a dystopia, but he says the idea intrigues rather than depresses him. He finds it "alluring” (85) that Marigold might be a stalker. The possibility makes him love her even more as a character.
Marigold appears not to see them as she goes to the counter to pay for her food. When they approach her, she claims she comes to the restaurant all the time. She tells them she walked past Whit’s house several times because she was worried about him, but she never knocked on the door. Cain and Freddie warn her that this behavior looks suspicious during a murder and stabbing investigation. She gets upset. She tells them that Caroline Palfrey, the victim from the library, worked at The Rag and that Whit has done extensive work for the paper, despite telling them otherwise. She volunteers to do research on Isaac Harmon, the subject of Cain’s book. After she keeps insisting, Cain says he’d rather she didn’t do it since he wants to preserve Isaac’s privacy and because his book is “a novel, not an autobiography” (91).
Because they are worried about her safety, Cain and Freddie take Marigold to her apartment, which is in a rather nice, older part of Boston. Cain has to retrieve his car first because it is “over yonder” (91) at the Brattle Theatre, he says. When the three arrive at Marigold’s apartment, Cain and Freddie leave quickly because her half-clothed roommate is there and angry that the food took so long. Cain asks Freddie if she really believes it was a coincidence that Marigold showed up where they were. He is not so sure. He’s also surprised that Marigold did not mention before that she had a roommate. Freddie is still giving Marigold the benefit of the doubt on the question of who stabbed Whit. When they exit Marigold’s apartment, an old friend of Cain’s called Boo (also known as Shaun Jacobs) is standing by Cain’s Jeep. He tells them that someone has slashed Cain’s “tyre” (93).
In his email to Hannah, Leo A points out a few Australian words in the dialogue (but not all of them, such as the American Boo using “tyre” in place of “tire”). He writes that he is making masks to wear and loves the anonymity they grant him. He tells her that the idea of an unclothed man in Marigold’s apartment is very appealing to him.
Cain changes the tire, which he pulls from the “boot” (96; the word appears in the description rather than the dialogue). Boo shoves him for approaching him from the left since (he claims) that is how murderers do it. Cain gives him money, and Boo says he will see Cain at the library. Cain met Boo during Cain’s teenage years when Cain ran away from home, and Boo also knew Isaac. Isaac told Cain to be wary of Boo, who has paranoid fantasies, but Boo is providing Cain with needed information about Isaac as Cain researches material for his novel. Boo returns and is agitated or high. He tells Freddie to be wary of Cain because she doesn’t know what Cain has done. Boo claims he did exactly what was asked of him by stabbing downward and back toward the spine, but he doesn’t want to do it again because there is always retribution when you hurt people.
Cain gives something to Boo, but Boo hits Cain on the head with a glass bottle and runs away. Cain stops Freddie from calling for an ambulance and the police because he doesn’t have medical insurance and doesn’t want to get Boo in trouble. Against her better judgment, Freddie takes Cain back to her apartment. One of the nosy women downstairs, Mrs. Weinbaum, turns out to be a retired doctor. She treats and closes the wound on Cain’s head.
Leo A gives feedback. People from North Carolina also use the term “boot” to refer to a car trunk, so it is fine for Hannah to use that word. He is also shocked that Cain does not have health insurance, especially since he claims that writers can get health insurance through writers’ associations. Perhaps Cain has a pre-existing condition. He tells her that the pandemic in Boston has escalated, but it isn’t as bad as New York. Boston’s streets are empty, and Leo A loves that. He is “writing more fluidly than ever. Perhaps [his] muse is fear” (102).
Cain and Freddie kiss, but Freddie refuses to make love with Cain because she worries he has a concussion. He goes to sleep in her bed, and she stays up to write. Two lawyers from the estate of Mrs. Weinbaum’s late husband show up. Although her husband was a doctor, she is not. She’s just under the delusion that she is one. The two lawyers get Cain to sign a waiver saying he will not sue her, and they give him contact information for a doctor who can take care of any cosmetic problems left by Mrs. Weinbaum’s amateur work. Cain asks detailed questions about how Mrs. Weinbaum’s delusions work. When they ask why he is curious, Cain tells them he’s a writer. They remind him that there is a confidentiality clause in the waiver he just signed. He replies that he is “a novelist […], not a reporter” and the “confidentiality clause does not preclude [him] using [their] client as inspiration” (109).
In his email, Leo A writes that this whole scene is something like a melodrama, and he is really enjoying it. He also tells Hannah that he went into a seedy bar the previous night to write in a setting that would make him feel like Ernest Hemingway. There was a fight, and one of the brawlers took a blow to the head with a bottle. Leo A has photos he took on Hannah’s behalf in case she wants to add details about Cain’s wound. “The shards caught the light and glinted in the blood” in the man’s wound (109-10).
In these chapters, Gentill turns the idea of Writing What You Know on its head to show that there is both creative and real-life risk in doing so.
What Cain knows is a childhood and young adulthood marred by violence. He believes he knows the people he encountered when he ran away, including Isaac Harmon and Boo. When Marigold offers to do factual research to help him add more background to his novel, he bluntly refuses her; he tells Marigold, “It’s a novel, not an autobiography” (91) and “This is my novel. I’d rather do it myself” (91). While he may be motivated by a desire to protect his privacy and Isaac’s, he is also trying to preserve his autonomy as a writer, including his need and right to deviate from the strictly factual parts of his relationship with Isaac. His encounters with Boo and the mystery around Isaac’s death indicate that it is what he doesn’t know that intrigues him as a writer.
Relying too much on what one knows can hamper the writer, but it can also pose a threat to the psychological and physical safety of the writer and others. Cain is back in Boston and talking with Boo because he needs more background on Isaac and what may have happened to him. His encounter with Boo ends with blood and stitches as well as a threat to Freddie’s safety.
Leo A is also a writer/reader whose desire to know leads him to some dangerous places. As Leo A’s character develops, it becomes clear that his efforts to “know” Boston around him and share those details with Hannah pose a threat to everyone around him. In Chapter 8, he introduces crime scene photos from a murder for which he is likely responsible. He believes that as a mystery writer, Hannah “practice[s] a dark and brutal art” that he finds “strangely seductive” (55).
Writing as seduction helps Leo A rationalize his movement from his sense of grievance over the agent’s rejection of his work to murder, and by the end of this section he has gotten over his writing block. He claims the overwhelming presence of death caused by the COVID pandemic of 2020 has freed him to write. What makes Leo dangerous is that he is too literal a writer. He cannot write what he hasn’t experienced. Writing what he knows leads him to more and more brazen acts of violence to expand what he knows.
As Leo A becomes more confident about his writing, his unreliability as a reader becomes clearer to the reader of The Woman in the Library and Hannah, the reader of his notes. For example, when Leo, a self-proclaimed Bostonian, gives Hannah advice on Cain’s diction, he shows his ignorance of Southern speech patterns. At a stretch, it is conceivable that rural North Carolinians might say “boot” instead of trunk or even “yonder,” but those are likely archaic word choices for Cain, a person from Charlotte, an important city in south-central North Carolina. Australian expressions are also not out of place in description for an Australian writer like Hannah. Leo has only partial knowledge of some of the details he confidently shares with Hannah, and that overconfidence makes him a poor beta reader.
Hannah likely knows this and is beginning to recognize the danger Leo A poses. Starting in Chapter 8, Gentill has Hannah introduce more and more overt threats to Freddie, adding tension and suspense to the story-within-a-story. There is also rising tension in the frame narrative. Leo A’s off-the-wall comments about loving the idea of Marigold being a stalker or having a naked, rude roommate are delivered without comment from Hannah since the reader never sees direct written interactions between Hannah and Leo A. Hannah does indirectly comment on Leo A’s pushiness by having Cain push back against Marigold and the Weinbaum estate lawyers’ attempts to limit his use of personal experience as inspiration. The most significant evidence that there is something awry about how Leo A interacts is his photo of the wounded man, which cannot be represented directly in the frame text other than by Leo A’s aesthetic appreciation of the gory wound on the brawler.
The developments in this chapter also get at the issue of the ethics of reading and writing. The episode with Mrs. Weinbaum shows living in stories of one’s own making can be harmful in the real world. The tone in that story is relatively light-hearted, but the interaction between Hannah and Leo A as readers and writers is more serious. Hannah and Leo A are engaged in a reading/writing feedback loop that inspires Hannah to write her whodunit mystery novel with off-kilter touches from Leo A’s life while reading and commenting on Hannah’s text inspires Leo A to become increasingly violent. One can extrapolate that Hannah tries to limit the contamination of her text with Leo’s inane suggestions and the gruesome realism he values. She carefully keeps direct presentation of dead bodies, including Caroline’s (the body ostensibly at the center of her mystery), out of her text in an attempt to limit her complicity in Leo A’s acts.
Hannah explores this question within the story-within-a-story as well. During the debate between Freddie and Cain, the two disagree over whether the character of a creator like Alfred Hitchcock should have any impact on how one judges his work. Cain’s insistence that he has the right to use details from the zany encounter with Mrs. Weinbaum, nondisclosure agreement notwithstanding, is still another example of a debate over whether the need to write trumps other ethical commitments. Gentill leaves that question unresolved in this section of the novel, but the presence of the issue in all the narrative layers of The Woman in the Library shows just how powerful the acts of reading and writing can be.