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The opening paragraphs establish the story’s protagonist as the archetypal homemaker, waiting for her husband’s return. The “warm and clean” living room is a testament to Mary Maloney’s meticulous housekeeping (22). The drawn curtains and twin glowing lamps illustrate her care in creating an inviting atmosphere. Mary’s “tranquil” posture as she sews suggests a woman contented in her role (22). Her “slow smiling air” anticipates Mr. Maloney’s return and the unborn child she is carrying (22). The adjectives used to describe Mary’s physical characteristics are feminine and Madonna-like. Her “placid” eyes, “translucent” skin, and “soft” mouth evoke Renaissance paintings of the Virgin Mary (22).
When Mary greets Mr. Maloney, her behavior confirms her to be the perfect wife and homemaker. Her demeanor is loving and caring as she selflessly attends to his every need. At this stage in the story, she is wholeheartedly invested in the role of domestic goddess. She lives only to serve and satisfy her husband, and her stereotypical subservience develops the theme of The Imbalance of Traditional Gender Roles.
Mary undergoes a dynamic character arc during the story. As she has devoted herself to her marriage, the news that her husband is leaving undermines all her life choices. Mr. Maloney’s departure effectively erases Mary’s identity and purpose. Struck by the injustice of the situation, she experiences a brief but murderous rage. Her subservience and docility up to this point make her violent outburst all the more unexpected. After Mr. Maloney’s death, she takes control of the situation with aplomb, transforming from a passive to an assertive character.
Mary’s determination to get away with murder is primarily driven by a desire to protect her unborn child. The actions she takes to secure an alibi and conceal the murder weapon reveal her wit and ingenuity. Mary subversively exploits her image as a natural caregiver and homemaker to deceive the men around her. The pretense comes easily to her as she has authentically inhabited the role up to this point. The gender stereotypes that once restricted Mary now give her license to escape punishment for her crime. In the story’s final line, Mary giggles as the investigating police officers eat the evidence: a sign that she is actively enjoying the deception.
Mary’s husband is an unsympathetic character, and Dahl presents him as the story’s antagonist. While Mary eagerly anticipates his arrival, his appearance introduces conflict into the serene domestic setting.
The unequal power dynamic in the Maloneys’ marriage is immediately evident from Mr. Maloney’s responses to his wife. While she greets him with an affectionate kiss and endearments, he is emotionally cold, replying with curt, monosyllabic answers. As Mary desperately tries to connect with her husband, he becomes increasingly distant until he finally orders her, “Sit down” (23). The harsh imperative highlights his patriarchal, controlling attitude toward his wife.
Mr. Maloney’s job as a detective requires him to help uphold the justice system. However, his private conduct is shown to be morally questionable. Announcing that he is leaving his pregnant wife, his main concern is to avoid a “fuss” that could adversely affect his career (25). By preempting Mary’s probable emotional reaction to the news as “fuss,” Mr. Maloney belittles the feelings of the woman who has devoted her life to him. At no point does he acknowledge that he is also abandoning his unborn child.
When Patrick Maloney declares, “For God’s sake […] Don’t make supper for me. I’m going out” (26), they are his fatal last words. The callousness of this statement, combined with his refusal to turn round and look at her, prompts Mary to kill him. Thematically, his murder reverses the power dynamic between the couple. Instead of dominating Mary, Mr. Maloney becomes her helpless victim. Nevertheless, readers are disinclined to pity Mr. Maloney. His hard-hearted treatment of his wife creates the sense that moral justice has been served.
A friend and colleague of Patrick Maloney, Sergeant Noonan arrives at the scene of the murder with fellow police officer, O’Malley. He represents the stock character of the incompetent investigating policeman. He and O’Malley unintentionally create humor and dramatic irony through their inability to see the evidence that is literally “right under [their] very noses” (34).
Sergeant Noonan’s actions help to develop the theme of The Imbalance of Traditional Gender Roles. His failure to solve the case is largely the result of his misguided gender assumptions. From the beginning, the policeman makes the mistake of associating extreme violence with masculinity. Using the pronouns “him” and “he,” Noonan assumes that the murderer is a man. This belief is influenced by his theory that the weapon is a heavy instrument made of metal. Mary builds on these assumptions by conforming to Sergeant Noonan’s notion that femininity equates to weakness and fragility. When she falls “right into [his] arms, weeping hysterically” (29), Sergeant Noonan responds by clumsily trying to comfort Mary. His suspicions are not aroused as Mary’s behavior seems entirely appropriate for a newly widowed, pregnant woman. Treating Mary with kindly condescension, he naively allows her to remain at the crime scene while the police search for evidence.
Mary makes fools of Sergeant Noonan and his colleagues by suggesting they search the garage while the real murder weapon is baking in the oven. She then entices them to destroy the evidence by offering them the cooked lamb. Instead of solving the murder they are called to investigate, the police officers become Mary’s accomplices. In this way, the officers’ actions inform the theme of Loyalty and Betrayal.
Sam is another unwitting male character whom Mary manipulates. The grocer plays a minor yet important role in the plot, as he is the first character to see Mary after the murder and vouches for her innocence to the police. After killing her husband, Mary quickly decides to make the helpful grocer her alibi. To ensure that her behavior appears natural, she practices what she will say to Sam in the mirror before visiting the store. She also freshens up her makeup to present an appealing mask of femininity. As a regular customer of Sam’s, Mary has an advantage, as the grocer knows her to be a devoted wife and homemaker. All she has to do is maintain her usual demeanor.
Mary’s acting skills and quick-wittedness are demonstrated in her conversation with Sam. She establishes her alibi by explaining that Mr. Maloney is too tired to eat out. She also bolsters Sam’s ego by seeking his opinion on cooking lamb from frozen. Perceiving Mary as a woman keen to please her husband, Sam sees the opportunity to make an extra sale. Asking what Mary intends to serve Mr. Maloney “afterwards” (28), he implies that she would be neglecting her domestic duties if she did not provide her husband with a dessert. Mary makes a point of deferring to his masculine authority, enthusiastically agreeing to his suggestion of cheesecake. By subtly treating Sam as her superior, Mary leaves him with the favorable impression that she is the ideal wife.
Like Sergeant Noonan, Sam is deceived by Mary due to his gender preconceptions. Wholeheartedly approving of her pleasant yet subservient manner, he believes her incapable of deception or violence. Although Mary’s visit to his store proves nothing, Sam confidently asserts her innocence to the police.
By Roald Dahl