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Percival Everett

Erasure

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2001

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Character Analysis

Thelonious “Monk” Ellison

Content Warning: The source text discusses racism, violence, sexual violence, anti-Black biases, anti-gay biases, and suicide. It also includes racist and sexist slurs that the guide reproduces only in direct quotations.

Monk is the protagonist and narrator of Erasure, which is written in the form of his personal journal. His name is a combination of the names of the jazz pianist Thelonious Monk, and the African American writer Ralph Ellison. Monk teaches English at a university in Los Angeles, and he defines himself as “a writer of fiction” (1). However, his authorial identity makes him nervous—he does not appreciate stories that have writers as their protagonists, which is why he hesitates to tell the story of his own life. So, he also introduces himself as “a son, a brother, a fisherman, an art lover, a woodworker” (1). In this way, he wants to emphasize that he has many facets to his personality.

Monk is African American, and he is concerned about the ways in which society defines his race, stating that society regulates his identity: “I have dark brown skin, curly hair, a broad nose, some of my ancestors were slaves and I have been detained by pasty white policemen […] and so the society in which I live tells me I am black; that is my race” (1). Because he is Black, society defines him and makes stereotypical assumptions about him. When Monk doesn’t fit into these stereotypes, they tell him that he is not “Black enough.” This affects Monk’s work as a writer, too. His latest novel is a retelling of an ancient Greek tragedy, and it perplexes editors because it does not connect to “the African American experience” (2), so they refuse to publish it. Monk is furious with the prevalence of stereotypical narratives about Black people, and he is especially upset when these narratives become critical and commercial successes, like Jenkins’s book about life in the “ghetto.” Monk believes that books like this prove the Racism in the Publishing Industry and Popular Culture; this exacerbates his artistic distress. Throughout the novel, Monk’s story ideas and statements about language demonstrate his literary concerns.

Monk’s relationship with his family is strained. He has not visited his mother and his sister Lisa who live in Washington in three years, and his brother Bill lives away in Arizona. While his father is dead, Monk’s memories of him and their close relationship are prevalent throughout the novel. His father, Benjamin, believed in Monk’s talent and understood his interest in literature. However, he also favored him over his Bill and Lisa, and Monk feels awkward about this with his siblings. He also feels guilty because Lisa takes care of their mother alone. Bill is gay, and his sexual orientation always keeps him at a distance from the family because he feels that they do not support him. Monk feels that his parents were “distant, cool to one another” despite their devotion to their household (152). Their relationship impacts Monk’s own ability to form intimate connections with people, especially romantic relationships. Monk always feels self-conscious and nervous around women he is interested in. In general, Monk experiences persistent feelings of “alienation and isolation” (152). When he first reunites with Lisa, he confesses to her: “Sometimes I feel like I’m so removed from everything, like I don’t even know how to talk to people” (26). Despite Monk’s concerns, Lisa acknowledges his uniqueness, saying that he is different and special.

Monk’s life changes as he confronts both his artistic and familial crises. Lisa’s death forces Monk to assume responsibility for his mother who has Alzheimer’s disease. Monk moves to Washington to care for her. Bill cannot offer financial assistance and Monk must find a solution by himself. He is frustrated when his novel is continually rejected by publishers, so he writes a satirical novel called My Pafology as a response to the cultural stereotypes of Black life that prevail in literary and popular culture. However, when My Pafology is quickly accepted for publication and Monk is offered a generous advance for it, he slowly begins to lose himself in the game of popular culture. His writer persona, Stagg R. Leigh, begins to haunt him.

After Lisa’s death, Monk’s mother begins to lose her memory, Monk becomes estranged from Bill, and he discovers that his father had an affair many years before. Monk feels that his family is collapsing, and these anxieties become mixed up with his worries about his art. As a writer, Monk never intended to represent his whole race or write a “Black narrative.” However, he now realizes that his idealism about his art prevented him from seeing how race impacts and regulates artistic expression. In the end, he feels that he, too, is “a victim of racism” (212). The irony is that he receives and enjoys the money from writing a book that commodifies Black suffering; Monk is disgusted with himself because of this. He feels his art is compromised and his values are dismantling. He admits to himself that he has become “a sell-out” (160). The literary award given to his novel makes him confront himself and the consequences of the commodification of his art. At the end, he attempts to claim the novel and reveal the truth about his intentions behind its authorship, but he realizes that he, too, has become a spectacle within the literary world he once rejected.

Benjamin Ellison/Monk’s Father

Monk’s father died by suicide some years before the events of Erasure. Despite this, he is present throughout the novel through Monk’s memories.

Benjamin was a doctor, and Monk was his favorite child because Benjamin thought Monk was intelligent and talented. He encouraged his son’s literary interests and was very understanding about Monk’s insecurities and unique personality. Despite this familial love, however, Monk notes that his parents were always emotionally distant to their children and toward one another. Monk notes that the distant relationship between his parents impacted his own ability to form intimate relationships later in his life.

Benjamin is described as a strict but caring person who saw fatherhood as his duty. Monk says: “My father saw his station […] as one defined by duty, and discharged said duty with military efficiency” (152). However, this view that Monk has of his father undergoes a shift when Monk discovers that Benjamin was keeping secrets from his family. Benjamin was in love with another woman—a British nurse whom he met during his time as a soldier in Korea—and he even had a daughter with that woman. Monk discovers all this through a box of his father’s letters that he left for his wife to burn. Benjamin’s letters reveal a dimension of his personality that was previously unknown to Monk—an emotional, tender, and intimate side that Monk had never witnessed.

Monk’s Mother

Monk’s mother is the person with whom Monk spends most of his time in the story. She has Alzheimer’s disease and is losing her memory; her health declines rapidly after Lisa’s death. Monk says that his mother was devoted to the household and says that she considered her role as a “service:” “My mother saw her life as a wife and mother as a service, a loving service, but a service nonetheless” (152). Thus, like Monk’s father, Monk’s mother, too, focused more on duty than on love.

Monk’s mother was the only one from her family who didn’t go to college, and she didn’t work outside the house. Her family name was Parker, and her siblings were much older than her; Monk notes that they are all dead. He never sees his mother’s side of the family and his mother did not speak about them much. Monk notes that “Mother had become an Ellison” (151), since she had given up her former identity in “service” to her new family. Even though Monk was never very close to his mother, he notes that she probably “understood […] [his] feelings of alienation and isolation” (152). In her few moments of clarity, she attempts to bridge this gap between her and Monk.

In one of their final conversations, she tells Monk that her husband was distant from her. She says: “At times, I believe your father was bored with me. I think I annoyed him. But he never said anything, never let it show on his face or in his tone, but I believe I saw it” (256). She confesses that Benjamin made her feel “small” many times (156). When Benjamin died, he left his letters to her, asking her to burn them. However, she gives these letters to Monk, who reads them and discovers that his father had an affair with another woman while he was married to Monk’s mother. Monk guesses that his mother has probably read the letters, too, and knew about the affair and the daughter Benjamin had with the other woman. Monk is concerned about her feelings about all this, but is never able to broach the topic with her; he feels like she, too, wants to communicate something with Monk but is unable to. This reinforces Monk’s thoughts about the inefficacy of language as an effective means of communication.

Lisa

Lisa is Monk’s sister. Despite her brief presence in the story, her character is impactful. Lisa followed the family tradition and became a doctor like her father and her brother, Bill. Lisa is divorced and lives alone. She is the only one who takes care of their mother as Monk and Bill live in other states.

Lisa is works at a women’s clinic and faces hostility for her work in protecting women’s rights to having abortions. Monk admires his sister’s courage and her devotion to work. He says: “I admired her far too much and in many ways I wished I were more like her. She’d dedicated her life to helping people” (4). While Monk intellectualizes problems and doesn’t work toward solving them, Lisa constantly works to help people who are struggling against inequality and poverty, and Monk admires this.

Lisa is murdered by an anti-abortionist outside her clinic. Despite her tragic end, she also lives on in Monk’s memory, and therefore in the novel. His life changes after her death as he reconsiders his relationship to his family and moves to Washington to take care of their mother.

Bill

Bill is Monk’s brother. He is a doctor, is married with children, and lives in Arizona. Bill is at odds with his family because of his sexual orientation. He is a gay man who has been forced to hide his sexuality because he was afraid of his parents’ rejection. In the novel, he experiences a personal crisis as his wife leaves him after discovering that he is gay. He is fighting for custody of his children and confronts discrimination from the conservative community in Arizona. This also impacts his job, leaving him in debt.

Despite Bill’s attempts to hide his sexuality, Monk had guessed early on that Bill was gay. However, Monk is unsure about whether their parents ever knew. Throughout the novel, Bill’s hurt and resentment from his family’s lack of understanding is evident. His relationship with his father was particularly strained and they could never communicate openly. Bill is not present to help Monk during their mother’s struggle with Alzheimer’s because he is confronting his own problems. After Lisa’s death, the two brothers do not become closer. Bill resents Monk’s lack of understanding and tells him he is like their father. Though Monk has no issue with Bill’s sexuality, he is irritated that Bill is consumed by his personal problems instead of paying more attention to their mother’s health. By the end of the novel, they lose touch.

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